Evil Mocchi Saga
Chaper 1 "Dream Artist pt. 1" I was running...I didn't know why, it just seemed like the best thing to do. I was still little, too little to fight back. I was also terrified by his face...That hate,...
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Aww, poor EM...Those are some pretty messed up nightmares. Keep on writing, awright? This looks like it's going to get interesting very quickly. *grins*
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Chapter 2 "Dream Artist pt. 2"I walked down to the laboratory and asked the neurologist about it. He said I was probably sleep-walking...or sleep-painting. I was going to argue, but it wasn't worth my...
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It's very good, EM, but I have one tiny suggestion. If you added just a little more detail to your stories, it would improve them quite a bit. Not that they aren't good in the first place.
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Yeah...I wasn't happy with the last one because it lacked detail But I closed out of Notepad(where I pre-type everything) without saving by accident, so I decided that that was going to have to...
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THis is pretty good. I'm interested on how the picture are bein made. Keep it up. In the time of chimpanzees I was a monkeybutane in my veins and I'm out to cut the junkiewith the plastic eyeballs,...
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Chapter 3 "Protector of the Pandoras"After a good night's sleep, I woke up in the morning to find another problem. The palace was being attacked by a tribe of Serenitys. They were torching the front...
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